Wednesday, September 15, 2010
Descriptive Essay
For my essay I am going to write about ta car crash i was in when i was very young. It accured when i was about six or seven years old. I was in Cindy Smith's Subraru, sitting in the back with Woody and Dana. Cindy and my sister Emily were sitting in the front. Anyways a couple of cars behind us there was this women who was driving her car. She fell asleep while driving and bumped into the person in front of her who then bumped into us. I remember vividly being dragged out of the car by a fireman. HE asked me if i was okay and what hurt on me. After being put in the ambulance i remember the doctor in the hospital gave me a teddy bear that i still have.
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this would be really good because you could go into such description of the car crash and waiting for help and what was going through your mind, it would be very very interesting if you still remember all of that. you should center your essay on waiting for the fireman and when he finally got there like only a span of 15 minutes is your whole essay, that would be siiiiccckkkkk
ReplyDeleteOMMMGGGGGGG I love this. Do it. It'd be cool if you could describe what you could have been thinking when you were blacked out. That'd be awesome. Good job Shmallison.
ReplyDeleteWell....Woody wasn't there and it was a Honda... but that doesn't really matter......DO IT!!! haha.....I don't really much of the sensations that happend, but if you remember it vividly, this will be dope.
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