River Essay

I am looking to transform a past essay from Lit, the "transcendentalist essay". I wrote about an experience i had river rafting and my relationship to nature through water. I am going to focus more on the actually journey of the trip and traveling through the water. I hope to explain my adaptation and connection to nature, that lacked before this significant trip i went on. I don't have the copy on file at the moment so i can't post the draft directly, but maybe i could get some input or opinions? Could this work?