Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Descriptive Essay

One of the most intense moments for me is before a hockey game. I want to go into great detail about everything I feel physically and mentally before a game. Going hand in hand with what I feel, I want to write out the steps of my actions that help me not explode into a could of dust in the locker room. I want to start out with my feelings and end with them. Nothing will be described other than those few minutes when I am sitting with all of my gear on, skates tight, only concentrating on my breathing.


Whacha' think?
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4 comments:

  1. K NORSeptember 15, 2010 at 10:56 AM

    Word. Sounds legit try to incorporate a metaphoric connection to your apprehension and excitement.

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  2. Chancee' ForestierSeptember 15, 2010 at 10:59 AM

    What do you mean? example? I'm a tad bit cofuseddddd.

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  3. alitassoneSeptember 15, 2010 at 11:24 AM

    i think this could be really good. I like that you've narrowed it down to a few specific moments and your anxiety. Moments before a game are always extremely tension filled

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  4. BekahSeptember 15, 2010 at 11:39 AM

    GREAT! I can't wait to read this. I think with enough description, you'll captivate the reader and make them feel like they're in your position.

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