So yea my essay is about hilling which gives me a lot of room to decribe our beautiful surroundings in this town. All the flowers, mountains and lush green forests are a huge part of the "hilling" process.
For instance, write about running down a mountain in quick, sporatic sentences to represent the quick, sporatic movements in hilling. Then have a jump where time slows down, and something like a bird catches my eye or the hanging moss on the pine trees, and go into detail for the next couple sentences decribing everything around me, then land.
I like this. I mean, you'll have the surroundings, but you'll also be able to go into detail about the sensations such as adrenalin. And no doubt, doing the sentences in a certain patter will definately help get the point across.
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